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Thursday, August 14, 2008
Well I got this composition from a primary 3 kid. Shall not say who, but he just came to Singapore and...I wonder how he would perform if he continues like this.
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It was a perfect day to go to Sentosa Island for a picnic, As it was a public holiday, thousands of people had the same idea as us. First, my parents bring me and my brother to rided the cable car. Secondly, we went to Sulosa Beach for picnic.
After that, we finded a place where near a coconut tree. We put down our picnic hamper, then my brother and I went to the changeroom to change to our swimming costuin.
After changing our swimming costuin, we raced into the water and splash each other. When it was evening, my family bring back home. I wish I have a perfect day again.
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It was a perfect day to go to Sentosa Island for a picnic, As it was a public holiday, thousands of people had the same idea as us. First, my parents bring me and my brother to rided the cable car. Secondly, we went to Sulosa Beach for picnic.
After that, we finded a place where near a coconut tree. We put down our picnic hamper, then my brother and I went to the changeroom to change to our swimming costuin.
After changing our swimming costuin, we raced into the water and splash each other. When it was evening, my family bring back home. I wish I have a perfect day again.